The
commands are said and the blast of the gun sends a shock wave of energy through
every inch of your body as you bolt forward towards the first hurdle standing
in your way of crossing the finish line. Your form is perfect as your leap and
bound. Nothing will stop you now, that is, until the person to your left doesn’t
make it over the hurdle. As the person trips, the hurdle is catapulted right in
front of you. With not enough time to react, you land on the extra hurdle
tossed in your way and find yourself staring up towards the sky flat on your
back.
The
snowboarding accident three years ago was a lot like the image you’re picturing
now. I took a trip up to Killington Resort in Vermont with the ski and snowboard
club from campus. I was an experienced boarder and had taught as a snowboard
instructor for some time.
It
was college weekend so the mountain was crawling with individuals’ at all
different levels. Some had never been on skis or a snowboard before, while
others were doing back flips off the half pipe. I wasn’t at the half pipe level
yet, but I carved with ease.
The
first day out was hectic with hundreds of skiers and snowboarders racing across
the mountain. I reached the top of the mountain, strapped in and was playing
Pac-Man with the others in no time. I was confident in my skills so at that
point I was worry free. Even the icy conditions didn’t faze me.
I
should have been paying more attention, especially knowing what I knew as an
instructor. There were too many people on the mountain that had no clue what
they were doing. The next thing I knew a woman completely out of control was barreling
towards me on skies. She side swiped me from the left and down I went on the
hard icy surface.
Next
thing I knew, I was staring up at the sky, and flat on my back with
excruciating pain coming from my tail bone. The pain took my breath away and
left me stunned for about 30 seconds until my friends raced over to see if I
was still alive.
The
girl that had hit me was already up and gone without an apology. I rolled over
to my side, hoping to relieve some of the pain, but it was unbearable. The ski
patrol thought I fractured my tailbone, but lucky I did not. The bone was just severely
bruised and took several months to heal.
Since
that accident, my biggest hurdle has been overcoming my fear of falling while boarding.
It’s been three years and I have finally started boarding again. At first, I
was extremely timid, but it’s slowly getting more comfortable. I have to keep
telling myself to relax or I tense up and that’s when I fall. Last weekend, I visited
Bristol Mountain and hit my first jump since the accident. I landed it with
ease. It’s still nerve racking to snowboard when it’s icy, but I am gaining my confidence
back while going heal edge (back edge).
Tonight
I’ll be testing my skills at Song Mountain, I let you know if I do any back
flips or 360’s.

Really enjoyed the post, specifically how you opened with a second person anecdote and applied it to a very first person experience. That was a great introduction.
ReplyDeleteComing from someone who spends more time falling down hills than skiing down them, I really appreciated this post and definitely relate.
I also love the knew layout.
One thing to mention: there is a sentence that's a bit wonky- "The next thing a new a woman completely out of control was barreling towards me on skies." It's toward the middle
Thanks so much for posting.
This group is going to have to figure out how to make posts to a Blogger account. Please do not email me. Work together to figure something out.
ReplyDeleteI think the hurdle metaphor is a really effective way to tell these stories! It's terrifying to go back to something after any kind of fall. Did you have to go through physical therapy sessions after that experience? That might be an interesting idea for a post, the idea of the recovery process being a hurdle experience within itself. Hope you had a great ski trip this weekend!
ReplyDeleteYou wrote this is a very story like way, which made it very enjoyable to read, rather than a list of things that happened. The connection between the hurdle and the skiing accident was delightful to read.
ReplyDeleteTwo small things: the minor sentence Cass mentioned, and in the second to last paragraph, I'm guessing you just left the word "was" out of "but it unbearable." Minor things.
This was great! And I loved the last sentence-great way to end it!
I feel like your personality really shined through this post, and I love that. I think relating problems you have now to legitimate hurdles is very clever, and will keep your blog interesting. I think you make your posts really relatable, which will keep your readers (like me) coming back for more. I liked your honesty in the post. I'm so sorry you had to deal with an accident while doing something you love. I'm glad that you are getting back out on your board though! Keep us updated with how the rest of the season goes. :)
ReplyDeleteAlso, I am having trouble figuring out how to directly follow your page. Can you give me some directions to do this? I can't find the follow button! If I find your page through our angel account, I start at your first post and have to proceed to find the newest one. I'm not sure if I am the only one having this problem or not.
I liked how you connected falling while hurdling to falling while snowboarding. I think that this is a good way to keep your blog interesting. Your first paragraph was also very strong. Like Cass said, writing that little scene in second person really got me hooked and made me want to keep reading. Good job, I hope you had fun skiing!
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